The substance is strong. I'd tighten the wording, correct a few phrases, and make the equity opportunity clear without sounding like an ad. Here's a more natural version: If you're looking for a Sacramento-area duplex light fixer with some meat on the bone for a fix-and-hold investment, this one is worth a closer look. The property is priced $25,000 below the lowest recent closed sale and nearly $100,000 below a recent comparable sale that had been fully optimized. That creates an opportunity to improve the property and potentially build equity rather than paying a premium for someone else's improvements. A whole-house inspection and pest inspection have already been completed, so you can get a good understanding of the property's condition upfront. Both units are 2-bedroom, 1-bathroom units with one-car garages. One unit was recently updated and is currently rented for $1,650 per month. The other has a long-term tenant paying $1,150 per month, leaving room for a future rent increase. Once updated, we believe the market rent for that unit should be close to the $1,650 currently being achieved by the renovated unit. Both units also feature covered rear patios and large private backyards. For an investor looking for a duplex with existing income, some upside in the rents, and the opportunity to add value through improvements, this property has several things working in its favor.This is offer subject to inspections. Pest Report and Whole House inspections attached. Additional pictures available by request. This is priced for an as is: sale. Call or text friendly agent with questions @ 916 730-3846